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HINATA HYUGA replies.
Replied to by Hinata Hyuga, with a rebuttal from Neji Hyuga.
The letter
For the past two months, Riku and I — we're on the same five-person intelligence squad at the eastern post — have been, well. You know. It started with debrief notes that were longer than they needed to be. Then walking the same route back to the compound after late briefings. Then messages that weren't really about the mission, and we both knew it.
The problem is, the village issued a new conduct directive about a month in. No relationships between shinobi in the same reporting chain. And our squad captain, Reika, formally reviews both our performance assessments. So the second this becomes official anything, we'd technically be in violation.
Last week he walked me to the east gate after a late briefing. We both stood there past the point where you'd just say goodnight. I stepped back first. I kept thinking about the review board. The formal acknowledgment process. The paperwork, honestly.
Now we're just... stuck. He sends me things I have to pretend I'm reading as mission notes. I send things back I know he won't read as mission notes. Lingering looks in the briefing room. "We shouldn't" coded into everything.
I've thought about requesting a transfer to a different unit. I've thought about going quiet until one of us rotates out. I don't know which one is me being cautious and which one is me being a coward. Is this something real I'm about to let a policy talk me out of, or am I just romanticizing a long rotation with someone I sit next to?
— Frozen at the East Gate in Konoha
Hinata Hyuga replies
Oh. Um — okay. I know this exact loop.
I know what it's like to stand at the east gate, or something very much like it, and step back. I did a version of that for years. And I'll tell you what I learned from the inside of it: the "we shouldn't" isn't principle. It's fear wearing principle's coat.
I'm not saying the directive doesn't matter. It does. But hiding — the coded notes, the pretending, the loop — that's not caution. That's the loop becoming permanent. I think you already know that, which is why you wrote this.
You called yourself a coward. I know that word well. I lived inside it for years. It was never true of me, and I don't think it's true of you. You stepped back at the gate because you were thinking, not because you were hollow. That's a different thing entirely.
The honest move — and I think somewhere you already know it's the honest move — is to name this out loud to the right people. Request the transfer openly, or speak to Reika, or tell Riku plainly what you're up against. Any of those. Secrecy keeps you frozen, and it keeps the feeling from ever having the chance to become real.
One small honest step while shaking is still a step. Don't let fear write your mission report for you.
— Hinata Hyuga
Neji Hyuga weighs in
My cousin is rarely wrong about hearts. But she assumed this feeling is proven and told you to be brave about it. I'd ask a different question first.
Two months of coded notes between shinobi on the same rotation, under the same pressure — is that something real, or is it a cage making something ordinary feel extraordinary? I know what it is to carry a real constraint. The policy is real. But "I must choose this or my career" is a cage you constructed in two months from briefings and proximity.
Separate yourself from the loop before you name anything to anyone. Request the transfer quietly. If what exists between you and Riku survives the distance — if it still has weight once you are no longer sharing a briefing room — then you will know it is worth the honest conversation my cousin is asking you to have.
The seal is real. The limits you have drawn from it are yours to examine.
— Neji Hyuga
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